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« on: August 04, 2003, 11:05:08 AM »
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« Reply #1 on: August 04, 2003, 09:15:50 PM »
First rate, as usual. Note to Mark: we need to post more of Andrea's work on the site.
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« Reply #2 on: August 04, 2003, 09:20:35 PM »
I agree.  =D  
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« Reply #3 on: August 04, 2003, 09:57:58 PM »
Very good. It sounds like a Linkin Park song to me, actually. Which makes it great! Wink  
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« Reply #4 on: August 04, 2003, 10:16:36 PM »
I was going for more of a Nichole Nordeman feel than a Linkin Park feel but whatever floats your boat!  
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« Reply #5 on: August 05, 2003, 04:48:19 PM »
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Very good. It sounds like a Linkin Park song to me, actually. Which makes it great! Wink
Except that it flows more smoothly, explore the issues deeper, shows more hope than LP does, and is generally better.   Wink   But yes, if Rokran here compares you to LP, it means he likes it, so its definately a complement.  You ever tried writing music to any of your songs?  That would be cool.
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« Reply #6 on: August 05, 2003, 04:54:34 PM »
Though I've played the piano for nine years now, writing music has never really happened for me. God either forgot to give me that gift or has another plan.  
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« Reply #7 on: August 05, 2003, 09:53:28 PM »
I concur about the posting part. I'll have to do something about that fact this weekend.
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« Reply #8 on: August 05, 2003, 09:55:36 PM »
Actually, I think I'll post this one tonight... the well is a bit dry this week.  =)  
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« Reply #9 on: August 05, 2003, 10:41:20 PM »
great poem.   Smiley  
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