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« on: August 15, 2003, 12:39:08 PM »
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« Reply #1 on: August 15, 2003, 03:13:01 PM »
Wow... your stuff really is first-rate. Very literate. I dig it.  
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« Reply #2 on: August 15, 2003, 08:25:09 PM »
I like it and I like it a lot. Hopefully I'll remember to post it soon, with your permission, of course.
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« Reply #3 on: August 16, 2003, 02:15:46 AM »
permission granted.
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« Reply #4 on: August 16, 2003, 10:53:50 AM »
Wow, that's something I'd expect to find when reading Paradise Lost. Since a lot of stuff on the Base is free verse, it's great to get in some more structured poems (or 'pomes' Wink) as well!
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« Reply #5 on: August 16, 2003, 12:58:56 PM »
Wow, that's interesting you picked up on that.  Paradise Lost was definately the inspiration for this one, yeah, the adam and eve thing, but the classic epic style is something I'm trying to play around with a bit to hopefully bring out the epic flavor in the mundane day to day activities we all participate in.

Glad you guys like it, thanks for the kind words. Smiley  
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