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« on: August 20, 2003, 08:43:53 PM » |
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"A Note From My Grandfather" Rivers don't run backwards, much like small children or aging drunks. Water drips down treetrunks. Silt collects somewhere downstream. Wish as you may, evaporation strips rainwater of bits of dirt and sand. The same water trickles over the lawn time and time again. It tastes different each time. Sometime, when you are dying, you'll see the pattern. - Skraps ps: enjoy. My grandfather never actually said this, but he might have
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« Reply #1 on: August 20, 2003, 08:46:27 PM » |
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Okay, onto another one. I was happy one night, and wrote this little treetise... (pun intended)
"The Tree Poetic"
The rings tell stories, and if I could interpret, there would be drought, arrow notches, flash floods.
The rings tell stories that span hundreds of years. From the first to the last Maya, or a thousand new stars.
The rings tell stories, but so do I. Let me spin a tale about furniture.
- Skraps
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« Reply #2 on: August 20, 2003, 09:14:00 PM » |
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Hey, you do good work, Skraps. I like both of 'em.
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Vlad!
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« Reply #3 on: August 20, 2003, 09:32:42 PM » |
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Does your grandfather usually lap up water from the lawn?
Ha, just kidding. I like the varied line length as a poetic device.
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If you don’t have freedom as a principle, you can never see a reason not to make an exception. There are constantly going to be times when for one reason or another there’s some practical convenience in making an exception. rms
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« Reply #4 on: August 21, 2003, 07:53:48 PM » |
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Here's another:
"Fall Unfair"
Let the ferris wheel be life and death, from agonized beginning to a breathtaking view of distances.
Let the children be sadists, popping happiness in pagan frenzy, too young to understand brevity.
Let the funhouse be over in twenty years of finding wonder in learning and a curse in having learned.
Let the mirrors be memory - distorted reflections and embarassed moments.
Let you be Persephone, blamed for summer and winter, stolen by Hades, and
Let me be mankind, refusing to learn from past lessons.
-Skraps
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« Reply #5 on: August 26, 2003, 12:05:29 PM » |
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wow, i really enjoyed all of your poems! keeeeeeeep posting!
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\"I've Lost Control Again\" JOY DIVISION
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« Reply #6 on: August 30, 2003, 10:04:16 AM » |
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Here's one I just wrote:
"Sight"
If I knew the hands that shaped this mortal coil, if I could see the patterns underneath the surface, and if only there was a sense of continuity,
I would rest in peace.
If I understood that random moves in predefined circles, if the backward rotation of planets defined a worldview, and if an atom splitting was God in an A-bomb,
I would rest in peace.
If I could see the angels round the camp, if the screams of a holy martyr were my own cries for justice, and if a pillar of fire flamed on my doorstep,
I would rest in peace.
I wouldn't repeat the snake-on-pole mistakes. I'd never doubt the sweetmeats scattered on the ground. No bits of gold ground up in my food.
These are the lies I tell myself.
-- Skraps
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« Reply #7 on: August 30, 2003, 03:43:12 PM » |
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I really like that one.
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« Reply #8 on: August 30, 2003, 09:15:03 PM » |
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I'm truely impressed with your work, Skraps. Keep posting your stuff. It's first-class all the way.
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« Reply #9 on: September 01, 2003, 10:32:19 PM » |
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"Meaninglessness"
we stand, skin clammy, spine crawling grasping white-knuckled grains of sand all 75 - before us the vista, the expanse an infinite universe, with meaning with meaning I swear it has meaning. if our knees knock, is it absurd? if our chest tightens, if we turn away, blinking tears turned red? I swear it has meaning. then we stand, denying by a campfire. the trials drag on, guilty, guilty - but our hands are warm. whos blood is this? I swear it has meaning. I am god, you are god, and my neighbor's rottweiler is Spinoza. perhaps the universe looks at us, supernova's fierce extinguishment black hole's draw, moth- and candle-like spectating on this wayward planet. grasping us with gravitic hands, all 75 billion, grains of worthless sand, saying, "I swear it has meaning!"
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« Reply #10 on: September 01, 2003, 10:34:20 PM » |
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"The Silent Partner" Time is an accomplice to the act, in the business of covering crime. A silent partner, full of promises and expectations. Cruel, sometimes, like a promiscuous husband. Understanding that there is a Judas in the fulcrum. Knowing power in the long arm of the clock. Hide the evidence, or reveal it. Capricious. Will-o-the-whisp tendencies. Child at play. Willing or not, time is an overseer of the act. There are moments of happy discretion, where a calm minute smooths over the iniquity, but there is also the casual uncovering of a bone. Skraps ps: love the double post  poetics comeing out of my ears...
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« Reply #11 on: September 02, 2003, 05:55:32 PM » |
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Your stuff is much more... well... poetic than mine, and less angsty, as well. I enjoy it immensely.
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« Reply #12 on: September 02, 2003, 05:59:08 PM » |
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I started doing this when I was twelve, and I'm not really any good. Yet. There are people at some of the poets message boards that I go to that could knock my socks off. There's this one Jewish dude that makes me look like a baby  Maybe one day I'll have something published or something. Who knows. I might just do it myself... unfortunately poetics don't exactly have a huge audience these days. Skraps
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« Reply #13 on: September 05, 2003, 02:54:12 PM » |
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You deserve an audience because your stuff is great.
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My Journal*My Poetry\"The quiche made me look fat.\" --Kirk, from Gilmore Girls when Lorelai asked why he was in a hot dog suit
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