much of the emotion and gravity of the story comes in little looks and glances from the actors, from scattered bits of dialogue, even from little details of the wardrobe or the set design or the soundtrack.
How about having it come from the actual story?
I can't say whether it's true about this film because I haven't seen it, but one thing that bugs me about some "indie" films is how they seem to be so much in love with the creative process that it seems to really be a love letter to the camera. I suppose that would interest me more if I were a filmmaker, but as a moviegoer, I tend to want the story to be the #1 priority.
Same thing with musicians who seem to be more interested in tweaking things around in the studio than in actually making enjoyable music, though that's less of an issue for me because I understand the nuts and bolts a little better. Still, you've got to realize that you're making music or movies for more than just the small percentage of your audience that is in the know on all of the little details of how these things are made.