Thanks, Kelli. =)
Part 2 is up tonight. And bloop, I got your review, but haven't had time to read it very carefully yet. I'll get back to you on it this weekend, though.
I corrected some things, in grammar and wording, so I'll wait for that and combine some of your suggestions with what I've already changed. Thanks, in advance, for checking into it.
Very well-written review, btw, Josh.