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« on: September 11, 2003, 08:12:35 PM »

I just don't get them. most of the descriptions aren't anywhere close to the real thing! it sounds like she is just making up words. Can somebody prove me wrong? 'Cause I have to read alot of them in school and get quizzed on them....

Fog - Sarah Teasdale

The Fog comes
On little cat feet
And on silent haunches,
Moves away

(That was from memory, so correct my if I wrote it wrong)

Stars (first stanza)

Alone in the night
On a dark hill,
With pines all around me
Spicy and still.

Night

Stars over snow,
And in the west a planet
Swinging below a star-
Look for a lovely thing and you will find it,
Its not far-
It never will be far

(What?)

The Look (very creepy)

Stephon kissed me in the spring
Robin in the fall
But Colin only looked at me
And never kissed at all.

Stephon's kiss was lost in jest,
Robin's lost in play
But the kiss in Colin's eyes
Haunts me to this day.


Well, thats all i know. hopefully you can enlighten me! B)
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« Reply #1 on: September 11, 2003, 09:14:58 PM »

That first poem is Sandburg, not Teasdale.

These little mini-poems are sort of an 'inspiration' about nature (or something else). Think of them as poetic observations or interpretations of thigns we mere mortals see and dismiss without a moment's thought.

The last poem is an interesting one, and I think I like it. What is it about it that you don't get?

'Twas brillig, and the slilthy toves
did gyre and gimble in the wabe
all mimsy were the borogroves
and the mome raths, outgrabe

Now THAT'S one you're supposed to be confused about Wink
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« Reply #2 on: September 11, 2003, 10:50:17 PM »

Yeah, those aren't your strangest poems there.  I find long narrative type poems to be the most confusing, actually.  I can't put together thats its telling a story and using all these crazy metaphors at the same time.  Also, in the case of Tennyson, they are overly wordy and obtuse.  Those are the poems that bother me most. Sad  
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« Reply #3 on: September 11, 2003, 10:56:53 PM »

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'Twas brillig, and the slilthy toves
did gyre and gimble in the wabe
all mimsy were the borogroves
and the mome raths, outgrabe
Dude! Is that a quote from Radiohead?

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ps: or could it be Lewis Carrol?
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« Reply #4 on: September 12, 2003, 12:48:30 AM »

Lewis Carroll.

`Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.
`Beware the Jabberwock, my son!
The jaws that bite, the claws that catch!
Beware the Jubjub bird, and shun
The frumious Bandersnatch!'
He took his vorpal sword in hand:
Long time the manxome foe he sought --
So rested he by the Tumtum tree,
And stood awhile in thought.
And as in uffish thought he stood,
The Jabberwock, with eyes of flame,
Came whiffling through the tulgey wood,
And burbled as it came!
One, two! One, two! And through and through
The vorpal blade went snicker-snack!
He left it dead, and with its head
He went galumphing back.
`And has thou slain the Jabberwock?
Come to my arms, my beamish boy!
O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!
He chortled in his joy.
`Twas brillig, and the slithy toves
Did gyre and gimble in the wabe;
All mimsy were the borogoves,
And the mome raths outgrabe.

follow this link to read an illuminating explanation of part of the poem.

I confess, I have chortled in my joy "O frabjous day! Callooh! Callay!"

I like The Look and Night and Sandberg's The Fog.
if I remember right, the first guy in The Look is named Strephon, not Stephon. another funny thing about that poem.

Night used to kinda bug me. the way the last line claims a lovely thing will never be far. but sometimes I'll notice something beautiful that I might not have noticed and think of the poem.
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« Reply #5 on: September 12, 2003, 11:54:19 AM »

yay! jabberwocky!! not that i understand it, but how fun?
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« Reply #6 on: September 12, 2003, 04:22:33 PM »

I like that poem (I actually know the part I quoted from memory, how sad is that?).

Beware the Jubjub bird.
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« Reply #7 on: September 12, 2003, 04:50:42 PM »

I like Jabberwocky, and used to have it memorized completely.  In the book Through the Looking Glass, there is an explanation of sorts.  Its all very silly, though.
[EDIT]I see the link above gets you to that passge in the book, so never mind.
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« Reply #8 on: September 12, 2003, 06:49:10 PM »

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'Twas brillig, and the slilthy toves
did gyre and gimble in the wabe
all mimsy were the borogroves
and the mome raths, outgrabe
Dude! Is that a quote from Radiohead?

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hee, hee, hee. Good one, Skraps. *high-fives Skraps*
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« Reply #9 on: September 12, 2003, 07:38:52 PM »

Yeah, I meant to say something to that effect.  
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« Reply #10 on: September 14, 2003, 11:04:04 PM »

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That first poem is Sandburg, not Teasdale.
 
yeah, sorry for the misquote....
Anyways, thanks. I still don't like them though.... =D  
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« Reply #11 on: September 14, 2003, 11:04:45 PM »

Arg, I keep thinking Im logged in....
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« Reply #12 on: September 15, 2003, 01:35:17 PM »

i like short poems...
it's far more difficult to make a statement with 13 words instead of 100...
they say everyone has one good Haiku in them...
but that it takes a lifetime to write...

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« Reply #13 on: September 15, 2003, 03:27:35 PM »

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The last poem is an interesting one, and I think I like it. What is it about it that you don't get?
Oh, I get it all right, I just think its creepy... Shocked  
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« Reply #14 on: September 15, 2003, 04:42:50 PM »

Haikus are silly
for they put limitations
on used syllables
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« Reply #15 on: September 15, 2003, 04:44:27 PM »

laugh  laugh  laugh  laugh  
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« Reply #16 on: September 15, 2003, 05:32:53 PM »

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Very good, Vlad!.
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