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Skrappybiskit
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« on: January 21, 2004, 03:22:33 PM »

Waking

I dreamed last night of a future
drawn in vivid hues,
light and dark. Like the shift
of light and water on a halftone
ceiling. Like the most surreal
motion picture.

I woke, then, expecting you beside
me. Disappointed that it
was just imagination. Hopeful
that it was prophecy.
Crying.

Suffer me the future, darling,
and I will paint it colours
you never knew. Places of
my imagining. Words
tailor-made.

Love.


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beautifulmess
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« Reply #1 on: January 21, 2004, 04:14:10 PM »

There are moments when I think I have talent. Then I read something of yours and am reminded I am wrong. Wink In other words, nicely done.  
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« Reply #2 on: January 21, 2004, 08:57:27 PM »

Thank you muchly, madam. Oh, and never stop writing.

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« Reply #3 on: January 21, 2004, 10:32:06 PM »


wow.  that was simply great.  
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